Talk:Rotation
Unclear about a couple lines
Don't want to pick nits, but as a relatively inexperienced Linux user, I would like to remove any ambiguity from instructions like these.
So, at the end, the instructions say:
- For both devices
- Successfully tested on n810 WM with 5.2008.43-7. After following the appropriate steps for your device, continue and run:
Three devices are listed above the heading -- was the N810 Wimax Edition added later and the heading after it not changed? This could read "For all three devices" or "For N800, N810 and N810we" and there would be no confusion then.
The information that it has been successfully tested on an N810we seems parenthetical, and shouldn't be put first, I think. Is this equivalent and correct:
- After taking the above steps appropriate for your device, continue by running the following command (successfully tested on an N810we with 5.2008.43-7):
Here's where my real stumble occurs -- are those three separate commands to complete or just one really long command? If it's one really long command, may I suggest a note indicating that; and if it's three commands then indicate that by saying "continue by running the following commands"? I know that as someone with little experience, I would be reassured to have this spelled out explicitly before I proceed. rsperberg 19:31, 15 February 2009 (UTC)